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PostSubject: Cry of the Moon   Sat May 31, 2008 8:00 pm

Yay! This story I'm very actively working on. I might even publish it if it's good enough when I'm done (just around my school, though, sorry) Warning: Lots of Japanese references. Enjoy!



Prologue



Kitara Daisuke walked on the bland road that led to his house. The sakura trees on the roadside were in full bloom, their pink blossoms strewn about everywhere. He stopped momentarilly while a strong breeze blew past him. Looking upward, he noticed that the sky had already started to grow dark. Daisuke raced the rest of the way home and entered just as the first drops of rain were falling.
"I'm home!" called out Daisuke while removing his shoes. He stood up, surprised that nobody answered him, and continued into the house. "Kasan? Dosan? Koichiro-nii? Ayame-chan?" he called, turning suspicious when none replied. He spied a note on the table.

Koichiro and Ayame are at the park.
Help yourself to some lunch; we'll be out for a while.
Love, Mom and Dad

Smiling, he removed the note and threw it in the trash. He pulled a rice ball out of the cupboard and started munching. Heh, I worry too much. Maybe I should work on that, he thought to himself.
After he finished, he went upstairs to get some sleep. He layed in bed for a while, but was unable to sleep at all. Finally, he got up and stepped over to his parents' bedroom to get a book to read. He stopped as he entered. In the bed were both of his parents. He shook his head and thought, Lazy bums. They're already home! He snuck up to the bedside and shook them to wake them up. His hands were wet as he pulled them away from his father's motionless form. Confused, he turned on a lamp. It was blood.



Next part of the prologue on Monday! ^_^ I know, you hate me for leaving such a big cliffhanger, but it's too hard to resist. I've already written up to Chapter 4, so you'll definitely hear from me again!
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PostSubject: Re: Cry of the Moon   Mon Jun 02, 2008 4:21 pm

AHH NOO! They prolly died D: AND YUS why did you hafta do that? x'D I hope he doesn't end up like Sasuke x0 And I hope you do get it published even if it is only for your school (:
Alll right I'm waitingg for the next part C:
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PostSubject: Re: Cry of the Moon   Mon Jun 02, 2008 4:56 pm

The next part will be delayed until tomorrow. One of my friends has my book. -_-
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PostSubject: Re: Cry of the Moon   Tue Jun 03, 2008 4:42 pm

ARGG! I thought we were your friends! -JK! lol allll right
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PostSubject: Re: Cry of the Moon   Tue Jun 03, 2008 5:10 pm

Finally!


The Next Part:


He staggered backwards and leaned against the wall. Blood; there was blood on his father's body. A quick, fearful glance showed that the same was trued for his mother. Daisuke stared at his hands for a few minutes before swallowing and standing up. He slowly made his way to the bed and felt for pulses. His hands shook painfully when he found none on either of his parents. He choked back a sob and sunk back to the floor.
A doorbell woke him from his sorrow. Oh no, what will I tell Koichiro and Ayame? He stood slowly, stumbled to the stairway solemnly, and looked down at his two wide-eyed siblings. His older brother came up and shook him. "Nee, what's wrong, Nii-chan? Are you okay?" Tears streaming down his face, he whispered, "They're dead, Koichiro. Dosan and Kasan are dead." As always, his brother recovered quickly and stayed calm. "Show me. Ayame-chan, why don't you go eat?" Ayame, who hadn't heard what Daisuke said, nodded and left. Daisuke led his brother into the room. Even his calm, in-control brother fell to his knees at the sight. Daisuke watched him close his eyes to steady himself. Koichiro commanded, "Daisuke, get Ayame out of here. I'll call the cops and meet you later. Head to the woods and find my wayward pine. It's marked by a K." Daisuke nodded and washed his hands quickly to get rid of the blood. He found his sister with a rice cake stuffed in her mouth. "Ayame, Nii-san's going to meet us in the woods to play, alright?" She smiled and nodded. "O-kay, 'Suke-Nii!" He smiled. Somehow his sister always did that to him. "Let's go Ayame-chan." The two left the house, one overjoyed and one almost in tears. They reached the pine Koichiro had described and waited there. Quickly, Ayame got bored.
"When's Nii-san gunna come?"
"When he's done."
"With what?"
"Something important."
"O-kay!"
This seemed to satisfy her for now. Daisuke watched as the black clouds fell back, revealing the sun. It seemed to be saying that everything would be "o-kay" from now on, and he couldn't help but smile.









Next part tomorrow, folks! It'll be the last part of the Prologue!
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PostSubject: Re: Cry of the Moon   Tue Jun 03, 2008 5:23 pm

Aww, and the sister doesn't even know yet! Poor girl T_T and poor kids. Well, maybe not kids. One of the brothers seems older.
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PostSubject: Re: Cry of the Moon   Tue Jun 03, 2008 5:29 pm

yupz. Koichiro is. Daisuke's, like, a teen. Koichiro's around 16-19.
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PostSubject: Re: Cry of the Moon   Tue Jun 03, 2008 10:52 pm

I figured. That's nice. HEY I just found out my friend, who's a guy, has a little sister. He's a teen, and he has an older brother 0:
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PostSubject: Re: Cry of the Moon   Wed Jun 04, 2008 7:38 pm

woah...
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PostSubject: Re: Cry of the Moon   Wed Jun 04, 2008 8:55 pm

Next Part!

Koichiro found them about an hour later. Daisuke, who was exhausted from amusing Ayame, welcomed his brother's interuption. "Nii-san!" Ayame exclaimed, her energy still high, "Can we play now? And when are Dosan and Kasan coming?" Koichiro diverted his eyes. "Ayame, they aren't coming." Ayame cocked her head to the side. "Why?" Her tiny voice was almost pleading for them to come.
Koicjiro bit his lip, and a small stream of blood trickled down. "They...they're dead." Ayame's eyes widened and she let out a whimper. Daisuke held her close and looked towards Koichiro for an explanation, but his brother gave him a look that said he'd explain later.
When Ayame finally fell asleep, Daisuke layed her down on the branch and looked fiercely at Koichiro. "Why'd you tell her?!" Koichiro replied with the same ammount of ferocity in a softer tone, "She had to know. She would have found it out anyway, and probably not in the right way. I didn't want to put her through that!"
As much as Daisuke was angry with him, he had to agree with that. He would rather that Ayame hear this from the two of them than somebody else. He turned and layed down on his own branch. "G'night..." he mumbled frustratedly. He listened to Koichiro getting into position until sleep overtook him. The last thing he heard was a rustle of leaves as a robin flew into its nest above.









Yayz! That's the whole prologue! Chapter 1 will be out on Friday once I get home from the last day of school!
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