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PostSubject: fantajii world (remix) *this is not the same world* Intro   Sat Feb 02, 2008 3:31 pm

Once apon a time there was a gigantic kingdom by the name of Fantajii. It had alot of inhabitants*if thats a real word* some of thome were very powerful and kind hero's, and some were very distructive villians. The Queen of this kingdom went by the name of Toli the most powerful woman in the kingdom of fantajii. One day she taking her horse for a walk through a vast plain of trees and beautiful flowers. She came across a boy vast potential to ether bring harm to the county or bring peace once and for all. Thats where our story begins. "hello there little boy why crying on such a peaceful day as this" says Toli. The boy doesnt reply he just stares at her before he faints. Toli rushed him to the best docter and part warior Melon. "Please take care of this little boy I must find out who left this boy all by himself." Melon takes the boy and examines him. "Boy do you have a name." says Melon. He knew the boy was pretending to faint. " Its Tmac,"says the boy "and im 13 years old". "Tmac is it that sounds more like a nickname......dont you know its dangerous out there with all the villians we have running around now." "yes, I do thats why I was out there....training so that I can stop this war once and for all. Toli reappears " So you want to stop this war huh...come with me" She takes Tmac down the hall of heroes, "look at this wall and study it, it has the most heroic people of the kingdom." She points the the pictures on the wall. "Tentaichi the brave....he fought against 5 ogers and 2 vampires at the same time and lived without a scratch on him.....Melon the prophet he is suppose to be our saver but his injury has left us looking for another hero....he healed you remember." "yeah about that I wasnt never hurt to begin with I was just faking" "WHATTTTTT as your punishment I bann you from ever coming to this place again now leave" Tmac left the gigantic city an headed east...."good thing they didnt notice I stole thier treasure sword." He pulls and shines the sword at the sun "so this is it, the great sword that suppose to grant power to anyone who uses it. "Now let me try it ou...." Tentaichi appears " give me back our prized sword. "....your...your...." Tentaichi runs toward the boy with a bloodlust "now die you thief" The sword then gives the boy mythical powers to fight "what is this power im feeling"says Tmac. Tentaichi then jumps up for for a devastating blow to the head. Tmac then lunges the sword through the heart of the great warrior."what have I done"says Tmac " good...good hahahhahah kill more of the heroes and power will be yours" says a mysterious stranger"come with me..and I will grant you all the power in the world to destroy" And so Tmac travels with this shady person.....who is this person and why does he want the heroes dead thats where our story really begins.
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PostSubject: Re: fantajii world (remix) *this is not the same world* Intro   Sat Feb 02, 2008 4:05 pm

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO:
That story is awesome LOLOLOLOLZ
" Toli the most powerful woman in the kingdom of fantajii."
BAHAHA xD
I love it...I'm sorry I banned you in the story xO
lolzzz I love how Melon's the prophet, and was supposed to be the savior...xD
And yeah, I think inhabitants is a word...and good vocab. That storryyy was so awesoooooome....Kokujin should be the shady person!! And I hope Tmac turns good...and where was Zeph I can't wait till she comes in!!
Do you want me to edit it and take the little errors off?
and woooow I hope you write mooooooore!!
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PostSubject: Re: fantajii world (remix) *this is not the same world* Intro   Sat Feb 02, 2008 4:07 pm

uhhh yeah.

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PostSubject: Re: fantajii world (remix) *this is not the same world* Intro   Sat Feb 02, 2008 6:52 pm

Did my dude die already? Even so I like the story.
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PostSubject: Re: fantajii world (remix) *this is not the same world* Intro   Sat Feb 02, 2008 8:52 pm

Lolz, oh yeah, sorry Ten :_O But I still think you survived :3 maybe... and is that an uhhh yeah as in I can fix the story's errors :3
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PostSubject: Re: fantajii world (remix) *this is not the same world* Intro   Sat Feb 02, 2008 10:07 pm

Nice story, Tmac! I can't wait till I come in *rubs hands together maliciously...jk*
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PostSubject: Re: fantajii world (remix) *this is not the same world* Intro   Sat Feb 02, 2008 10:31 pm

hahahha I can't wait either x3
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PostSubject: Re: fantajii world (remix) *this is not the same world* Intro   Sat Feb 02, 2008 11:08 pm

I hope you write more soon.
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PostSubject: Re: fantajii world (remix) *this is not the same world* Intro   Sun Feb 03, 2008 2:11 pm

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Lolz, oh yeah, sorry Ten :_O But I still think you survived :3 maybe... and is that an uhhh yeah as in I can fix the story's errors :3

Yes.....and you wont have to wait long for part one...that was the proluge or however yo spell it.....its coming next weekend
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PostSubject: Re: fantajii world (remix) *this is not the same world* Intro   Sun Feb 03, 2008 2:11 pm

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PostSubject: Re: fantajii world (remix) *this is not the same world* Intro   Tue Jun 24, 2008 3:16 pm

You know i really should post up part two

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