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Number of posts: 763 Location: Killing my computer for dying all the time Currency: 1500 tajii Battle Coins: *crickets chirping* Registration date: 2007-08-17
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 | Subject: Re: Xzal Kopur Sat Sep 13, 2008 11:01 am | |
| lolz. Zhelhoro Toli, je xu dzgavn zing mene xzalu' xkak y xu zchanon viuk xzalu' gaya. ^^ I'm tired after the football game last night...  We played in the rain -_- ohz, here's the third part, and I'll add the exact translations for this and the one before it too. Nor e pozoroad dynazaro. Nor e pozoro u dzxak uur xu jhav, zeiaad y kzvekaad, kzvekdreki, jhavdraki, y zpar dzxaki-zei. Nor e pozoro de rehe; de Dzgavn y Zchanon. Nor e pozoroxoh u aerah. Nor e pozoro u uaua, u uuva, y u aira. Nor e pozoro xu zxtom de xu zxtom. Iyu hoff Tzak yexrad, Nor auru xu darua qaai. Upt zxal lexad horu rehdyaad ord lexoro doruaad voe xu xerdi e xu nuverehe. Xu xzal aagad u yezr Nor. Yr aagx zxalur xu xzal hoff aagad yezroro voe gayath zpakrxal. Xu yezrxza gyuyu zhe de xu Ukvak Narj raaz. Xu yezrxza fraigl nuve daruad xu Ukvak Narj; xu Ukvak Narj yezrad xu yezrxza y ayasandr de xu xzal ry Nor y brukth ziater zhoqr, kaizak, y urum. Urum aed gyugadas u xu Szaveth Brayzen y neyad uur xu zpakrxza lexiv. Xu xzal de xu Szaveth Brayzen viuk zpairl xu zpakrxza horu yezrad xu Ukvak Narj. Xu urum aed lexad uur xu xzal de xu Szaveth Brayzen hor zayenth zxalur. Woah, long one! English is: | Spoiler: | | | Nor was trained to be the heri. He was taught to fight with the sword, bow and arrow, dagger, rapier, and other weapons. He was taught of religion; of Dzgavn and Zchznon. He was taught how to count. He was taught to write, to read, and to draw. Hwe was taught the geography of the world. When at last Tzak died, Nor took over the rule easilly. But there were those who believed that being ruled by an outlander was a sin. They tried to assasinate Nor. After many attempts, they finally turned to killing by magical means. The assasins summoned one of the great Dragon Killers. They couldn't control it; it killed them and all of the people, including Nor and his palace guards, staff, and family. One family ran to the Brayzen Lakes and pleaded with the mages there. They sent back a mage who killed the Dragon Killer. The lone lived with the people of the Brayzen Lakes for many years. |
And the exact: | Spoiler: | | | Nor was trained heir-to-become. Nor was trained to fight with the sword, bow and arrow, dagger, rapier, and other weapons. Nor was teached of religion; of Dzgavn and Zchanon. Nor was teachedhow to count. Nor was teached to write, to read, and to draw. Nor was teached the world of the world. When finally Tzak died, Nor took the rule easilly. But people existed who believed that existing ruled by the outlander was the sin. The people tried to kill Nor. After tries amny, the people finally tried killing by ways magical. The killers summoned one of the Dragon Killers great. The killers could not rule the Dragon Killer; the Dragon Killer killed the killers and all od the people, including Nor and guards his royal, staff, and family. Family one fled to the Lakes Brayzen and pleaded with the magicers existing at. The people of the Lakes Brayzen sent back the magicers who killed the Dragon Killer. The family one existed with the people of the Lakes Brayzen for years many. |
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|  | | AtoliSky Admin


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 | Subject: Re: Xzal Kopur Sat Sep 13, 2008 2:46 pm | |
| my the sungod shine on people back and the moon godessguid people the way? I dunno x3 And aww yeah it rained on our football game too, but I didn't go 'cause I'm not in band anymore... Wow. Poor Nor ) :...and taking away magic? nooo! The ending is pretty sad o.0 I like your addition of the ending "zez" tho, in the list. It's coolzez [: That is awesomezez *.* Whoa, sweetzez! D: wowzez. |
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 | Subject: Re: Xzal Kopur Sat Sep 13, 2008 2:54 pm | |
| oh btw I sent a pm to everyone, but you can ignore it. [: It just says go post in the announcements. And I was thinking, we could keep all the countries open and only certain creatures could live in each? And that maybe...I don't think you'll like this idea, but maybe since there's so many creatures and that makes things so complicated, we could keep everyone half-human or something. Like in one country, wolf-humans, one mer-people, one, dragon-people, and one cat-people? They can all be in war, and the other creatures, like mystical creatures and obake can live in the outskirts of the countries and can be dangerous to all the half-humans, because they don't like the war. And as for fairies...they can only be played by high posters, and they're all loners because they are hunted down for their special skills? |
|  | | Zephyr Admin


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 | Subject: Re: Xzal Kopur Sun Sep 14, 2008 10:19 am | |
| Sounds good for a start, at least. I'd suggest it and let everyone have a look at it. |
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 | Subject: Re: Xzal Kopur Sun Sep 14, 2008 11:13 am | |
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|  | | Zephyr Admin


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 | Subject: Re: Xzal Kopur Sun Sep 14, 2008 6:27 pm | |
| | AtoliSky wrote: | | my the sungod shine on people back and the moon godessguid people the way? I dunno x3 |
The translation's in the list
| AtoliSky wrote: | And aww yeah it rained on our football game too, but I didn't go 'cause I'm not in band anymore...
Wow. Poor Nor ) :...and taking away magic? nooo! The ending is pretty sad o.0
I like your addition of the ending "zez" tho, in the list. It's coolzez [: That is awesomezez *.* Whoa, sweetzez! D: wowzez. |
lolz. Hate to use a cliche, but wait, there's more! The story isn't over yet. Might as well post it now. Zxalur kopur, pzuvv zayenth zaekt kopur, xu xhax horo e xu zhexeig-kopur de xu urum, gyuad zpairl u Shyandr Dayadar, wiretad voe xu xzal de zu Szaveth Brayzen "Ayashar." Xu xhax ainad y ayutad u garyk xu Zhoq nuvur. Xu xhax e Zhoxqov Dzerek. Dzerek xzarediad ord xu xzal kopi de Shyandr Dayadar eadaro wiretad xu Xzal Kopur, y ord Zhoq ziater eadaro wiretad xu Xzal Nuvur. Ayasandr vrui xu buru de xoh zxtom xzal' ayutad. English is: | Spoiler: | | | Much later, around seven-hundred years later, a boy who was a descendent of the family returned to Dayadar Valley, called by the people of the Brayzen Lakes "Ayashar." He settled and started to raise a new Empire. He was Emperor Dzerek. He deemed that the extinct people of Dayadar Valley would be called the Ancient People, and that his Empire would be called the New People. This is the tale of how our land began. |
And exact: | Spoiler: | | | Many old, around years seven-hundred old, the man who was thedescendent of the family, goed back to Valley Dayadar, named by the people of the Lakes Brayzen "Ayashar." The man settled and started to raise the Empire new. The man was Emperor Dzerek. Dzerek said that the people extinct of Valley Dayadar was-ed-to-become named the People Ancient, and that Empire his was-ed-to-become named the People New. All is the story of how world people's started. |
One more part before the history is done! |
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 | Subject: Re: Xzal Kopur Sun Sep 14, 2008 7:21 pm | |
| Rolf, but wait, there's more....lolz Zeph xD yay! The tale of how it began has ended! * claps at storyteller<---lol. the beginning ended wait only one more part? oh ahhh I can't find it on the list ]: |
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 | Subject: Re: Xzal Kopur Mon Sep 15, 2008 6:58 pm | |
| It's at the bottom of one of the sets. Last part of the history! Buruth kzaneth zxtom zpar xzaredi e xoh zparth ead zhexeig-kopurth de qzavikxza kzaneth Ayashar, xph zhexeig Beteth' rahdi Gorel gyugad aux, ergo kzaneth kopurxeig ziater u xu Reyxrth Kyr de xu aux, xoh Betex e aizrenad voe xeryerth kzaneth xu Shieth de Shayzar, aewe Betex jiriad weig ziater, xoh Zheweig ziater huuad xu ayay vydyr y kzanad u zxavri, y xoh, ayay xu xerekx iyu xu Xzal Kopur ead zpairl eyanth, Xzal Kopur jheread, aed xoxi zxavrioro a xu Shieht Xunder y xu zpar xoxi gyuoro aux u Shyandr Dayadar. Zo, ayasandr et xu ayay, y ayasandr et jheread. Je xu dzgavn zing mene xkxk xzalu' y xu zchanon viuk gaya xzalu'. Woah, that's a big one! English: | Spoiler: | | | Tales from other lands tell of how their people were descendents of deserters from Ayashar, how Beteth's second son Gorek fled north, away from his father to the Ice Mountains of the North, how Betex was kidnapped by raiders from the Plains of Shayzar, where he found his wife, how his daughter suffered the same fate and decided to stay, and how, in the time when the Ancient People were still nomads, they split apart, one group staying in the Southern Plains and the other group moving north to Dayadar Valley. Thus, all are connected, and all are sepearate. May the sun shine on your back and the moon guide your way. |
And the exact version!: | Spoiler: | | | Stories from lands other said of how others was-ed descendents of abandoners from Ayashar, how son Beteth's second Gorek go-ed north, away from father his to the Mountains Ice of the North, how Betex was stolen by raiders from the Plains of Shayzar, where Betex have-ed wife his, how daughter his suffered the same fate and choose-ed to stay, and how, same the time when the People Ancient was-ed back nomads, People Ancient seperated, one group staying in the Plains Southern and the other group going north to Valley Dayadar. So, all are the same, and all are seperated. May the sun shine on back person's and the moon guide way person's. |
Confusing, nee? ^^ Well, that's the whole history. Next up is The Story of the Sun and the Moon. And after that...well, nothing. Give me a story idea, or something you want explained in detail from this story (and the other one, when I post it). Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease? And there's a couple more words on the list. Should we move the thread to OOC now? |
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 | Subject: Re: Xzal Kopur Mon Sep 15, 2008 7:49 pm | |
| Oops, my bad. Found it. AND it's the end of the paragraph :'D I understand a sentence! Weeeeee Wow, that little paragraph could be like 5 novels xD ( btw I like the name Ayashar for that place for some reason...) Hai, sliiiightly confusing xD nah, jk. It's all right, it's just a lot of history packed together. Sure, we can move it to OOC and story idea ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!!! Well. who are the raiders of Shayzar? And story idea, huhhz, well OK, this doesn't sound well thought up, but what about the story of the stars? I always thought stars were amazing and the sun and moon got too much attention..hehe |
|  | | Zephyr Admin


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 | Subject: Re: Xzal Kopur Tue Sep 16, 2008 5:06 pm | |
| | AtoliSky wrote: | Oops, my bad. Found it. AND it's the end of the paragraph :'D I understand a sentence! Weeeeee Wow, that little paragraph could be like 5 novels xD ( btw I like the name Ayashar for that place for some reason...) Hai, sliiiightly confusing xD nah, jk. It's all right, it's just a lot of history packed together. Sure, we can move it to OOC and story idea ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!!! Well. who are the raiders of Shayzar? And story idea, huhhz, well OK, this doesn't sound well thought up, but what about the story of the stars? I always thought stars were amazing and the sun and moon got too much attention..hehe |
Raiders of Shayzar, eh? I'll make the story ^^ I might as well go ahead and make the stories of how the four other nation-oids came into being and existed. And I might include some stories that are more like children's fairy tales or nursury rhymes, and such. Like the stories you'd get told at bedtime (or in the story's case, the daily meeting around the Sundown Fire). Heck, I might even make songs, once I get my voice back enough to sing them. How I'll get it online's another story. I might not be able to...but if that's true then I'll just post sheet music or something. >.< And the stars are mentioned in The Story of the Sun and the Moon. |
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 | Subject: Re: Xzal Kopur Wed Sep 17, 2008 3:49 pm | |
| Yay stars! And yay Raiders ^^ AI think it would be interesting. And wowwww  that'd alll be awesome! ( we could even rp some of the history...) And I'm sure you could get it online easyy. (( But WHOA do you notice something...off about the site or is it just me o.0;  ) |
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 | Subject: Re: Xzal Kopur Wed Sep 17, 2008 6:31 pm | |
| ((Yeah...The info thing at the top's ginormous!)) Oh, and I've written a song! I still have to finish translating it and adding drums and maybe a pipe or something, but I'll post the sheet musiz soon. Warning: It'll be pretty sloppy, cuz I'm not used to writing music. Sun and Moon Story Time! The Story of the Sun and the Moon Zxalur spter xu xzal de xu Shieth Xunder gyuad aux; iyu xu zxtom e ayzyr a vvell, lexad ead rahd xzafth, aed xe y aed we. Wireth xu xe y we ead Dzgavn y Zchanon. Dzgavn ede aedzed a xu Nuvejad aewe Dzgavn y Zchanon lexiv, zo Dzgavn weiderad xu xarkr de gavn. Zchanon wexad Dzgavn; Zchanon durad kyn ziatror u xaidai xu gavn u zedere. Xu rahd deysad reyxr y weidrad szaveth y szareth. Gavn Dzgavn' ayasundrad xu zxtom, keetzoro xu zxtom gaab. Zchanon weidrad nonath y ukad xu reyxrth a kyn. English: | Spoiler: | | | Long before the people of the Southern Plains moved North; when the world was covered in darkness, there were two beings, one male and one female. Their names were Dzgavn and Zchanon. Dzgavn felt lonely in the Endless Expance where they existed, so he carved a sphere out of fire. Zchanon helped him; she used her ice to turn the fire to rock. The two built mountains and gouged out lakes and seas. Dzgavn's fire filled the Earth, keeping it warm. Zcanon formed rivers and topped the mountains in ice. |
And you can get the exact translation on your own if you want it (srry, I'm tired)
Bonus! The song's tune is: CGGGGFE_DB_CDE_FDCB_B_GGGA_B_A_GFGGCE_DB_C Not much of a hint, but there ya go! (The _'s are flats, so E_ would be E flat) |
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 | Subject: Re: Xzal Kopur Wed Sep 17, 2008 6:32 pm | |
| Ohz, and there's new words (some song lyrics!) |
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 | Subject: Re: Xzal Kopur Thu Sep 25, 2008 6:58 pm | |
| Ohhhhhhh!!! Amazing!!! Sorry I didn't reply sooner!! * claps*! Yay Zephyr-sama!! Gahhh no musical instruments in my room right now...I'm gonna play it later and learn it [: And ahhh the _ thing for flat was a funny idea hehehe |
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 | Subject: Re: Xzal Kopur Thu Sep 25, 2008 8:07 pm | |
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